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How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!

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Post by Emily on Sat Apr 30, 2011 2:25 am

The wind howled in his ears, leaves rustling on the floor beneath him. A cat ran in front of him, the bell on its collar jangling, making him jump slightly. The wind got louder, whistling through the air. Adam clutched at his thick jacket, zipping it up further. He wasn’t cold, but it offered him protection in a strange way. Suddenly Adam felt the urge to stop. A lump developed in his throat, he couldn’t speak or move. His bottom lip trembled as a dark figure grabbed his neck, ramming him into the brick wall. His head smashed into the hard, bumpy texture, a crack filling the empty street. His mind fuzzed over for a second or two, before he regained full consciousness. Adam took a blow to the chest, it was only a natural reaction to protect himself. His leg whipped into the air, striking the figure, but they didn’t seem to be hurt. In fact, they laughed. He swallowed nervously, trying to think of something to do, but all his ideas were blank. Another blow, but this time to the stomach. It winded him, making it nearly impossible to breath. He felt his body lifting off the ground, then being pinned to the wall. The moonlight shone down, highlighting a person’s face. In fact, Adam wasn’t sure if they were human. Their eyes…the eyes were black. Not the iris, the whole eye. Black. The small light traced soft lines of the face; a female. He couldn’t help but think that she would be a beautiful person if…she wasn’t this thing. This thought instantly disappeared as her jaw elongated, plunging into his neck with a hiss. The darkness took hold, as he slipped away, from his last moments of living.
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Post by Nameless Child on Thu May 05, 2011 6:27 am

YAY! I love this. You're a great writer (as i've told you about 1,000,000 times)... Very Happy
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Post by bisted on Thu May 05, 2011 6:29 am

Awesome! We can haz more?
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Post by Nameless Child on Thu May 05, 2011 6:31 am

EEP...this is v.good...
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Post by Nameless Child on Mon May 09, 2011 2:09 am

You still rule!!!!
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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Mon May 09, 2011 2:10 am

amazing!
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Post by Nameless Child on Mon May 09, 2011 2:11 am

:suspect:- Ninpire wrote:amazing!

Indeed
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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Mon May 09, 2011 2:13 am

farao wrote:
Suspect- Ninpire wrote:amazing!

Indeed


yup
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Post by Nameless Child on Mon May 09, 2011 2:38 am

Suspect- Ninpire wrote:
farao wrote:
Suspect- Ninpire wrote:amazing!

Indeed


yup

Yes-aroony..
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Post by Agatha on Mon May 09, 2011 2:43 am

farao wrote:
Suspect- Ninpire wrote:
farao wrote:
Suspect- Ninpire wrote:amazing!

Indeed


yup

Yes-aroony..
Are you guys now just fighting over power?
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Post by Nameless Child on Mon May 09, 2011 2:44 am

Agatha wrote:
farao wrote:
Suspect- Ninpire wrote:
farao wrote:

Indeed


yup

Yes-aroony..
Are you guys now just fighting over power?

...well, yes, but Emoo pop IS amazing!
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Post by Emily on Mon May 09, 2011 3:27 am

Okay...here's some more...



January 1’st, 2012

Another year. Adam rolled out of bed, grunting at the light shining through the slits of the blind. He glanced over at the clock before wearily rubbing his eyes and pulling on some clothes that were on the floor. The sound of a boiling kettle could be heard outside the door, which was the only problem with the layout of his flat; the kitchen was always too close to the bedroom. He walked through to find Christa staring intently at the steam rising into the air. He coughed, but she didn’t look up.

‘If you’re seriously going to ignore me because of last night-‘
‘Don’t, Adam’ Christa held up her hand, and then busied herself with making a coffee.
‘It happened, and you can’t pretend like it didn’t’
The metal spoon hit the sides of the mug, making clinking noises.
‘You’re so pathetic’
Christa dropped her spoon on the kitchen worktop angrily.
‘I’m pathetic? What’s pathetic is that you took an advantage of a fucked up drunk’
Adam scoffed and stared at the wall.
‘I didn’t take advantage. You said you wanted to’
‘I was drunk Adam! I was clearly out of my head’
‘No, you were moping around because Tom had left’
‘whilst being drunk’
‘You weren’t’
‘Yes. I was’
‘No’
‘Yes’
Christa gulped the coffee down, before pulling a face as it scorched her tongue.
‘I wouldn’t feel like I had been hit by a car this morning, if I wasn’t drunk last night. Plus, I can’t remember half the things I did, or said’
Adam hesitated as she picked up the mug, shuffling into the living room and sat on the sofa. He followed her slowly.
‘Are you trying to make me feel bad about it?’
‘Yes’
‘Why?’
‘Because I do, and you should too. You cheated on Celia’
Adam shrugged, even though Christa was facing away from him.
‘We’re on a break’
‘Since when?’
‘Since I said so’
‘Does she know about ‘this break’ as you call it?’
Christa laughed weakly when Adam didn’t reply. He sat down next to her on the sofa, studying her expression.
‘I still like you, Christa’
She paused from drinking, and placed it carefully on the small table in front of her.
‘We’ve been through this before’
‘It’s possible to like two people at once, you know’
‘Yes. But when that happens, someone always gets hurt’
‘In this situation it would be-‘
‘Me, Adam. This whole thing, it will blow over. You’ll go back to Celia and I’ll find someone else. Nothing will be said, okay?’
‘whatever’
‘What’s that supposed to mean?’
‘It means, whatever’
‘If you want to leave it then, fine’
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Post by Nameless Child on Mon May 09, 2011 3:31 am

I I love you this...
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Post by bisted on Mon May 09, 2011 3:35 am

J'adore!
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Post by Nameless Child on Tue May 10, 2011 3:04 am

WOO!!!
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Post by Agatha on Fri May 27, 2011 11:14 pm

Cannot wait for more!
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Post by Howling-Shadow on Sun May 29, 2011 6:47 am

Beauty can come in weird forms but this is a beauty that everyone can see the beauty of a writer
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Post by Nameless Child on Sun May 29, 2011 10:47 pm

Emoo pop wrote:How to be a vampire, chapter one:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/1/How_to_be_a_vampire

Very Happy I seriously love this. Very Happy
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Post by Emily on Thu Jun 02, 2011 12:00 am

How to be a vampire chapter two: The previous night

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/2
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Post by Nameless Child on Thu Jun 02, 2011 2:37 am

Emoo pop wrote:How to be a vampire chapter two: The previous night

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/2

J'adore!
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Post by Cris on Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:28 am

cool, good stuff.
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Post by Nameless Child on Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:27 am

OMG. Seriously LOVE this. I love you . Keep going, please!
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Post by Nameless Child on Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:49 am

Emilia wrote:Return with fury:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/4/

Again. amazing. Very Happy
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Post by Emily on Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:50 am

a little Christmas present Wink

sorry it's been so long.

The Dog days are over:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/6/
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Post by Nameless Child on Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:21 pm

Emoo pop wrote:a little Christmas present Wink

sorry it's been so long.

The Dog days are over:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/6/

Hooray! Thanks for carrying this on, great job. Smile
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