How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
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How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Emily Sat Apr 30, 2011 2:25 am
The wind howled in his ears, leaves rustling on the floor beneath him. A cat ran in front of him, the bell on its collar jangling, making him jump slightly. The wind got louder, whistling through the air. Adam clutched at his thick jacket, zipping it up further. He wasn’t cold, but it offered him protection in a strange way. Suddenly Adam felt the urge to stop. A lump developed in his throat, he couldn’t speak or move. His bottom lip trembled as a dark figure grabbed his neck, ramming him into the brick wall. His head smashed into the hard, bumpy texture, a crack filling the empty street. His mind fuzzed over for a second or two, before he regained full consciousness. Adam took a blow to the chest, it was only a natural reaction to protect himself. His leg whipped into the air, striking the figure, but they didn’t seem to be hurt. In fact, they laughed. He swallowed nervously, trying to think of something to do, but all his ideas were blank. Another blow, but this time to the stomach. It winded him, making it nearly impossible to breath. He felt his body lifting off the ground, then being pinned to the wall. The moonlight shone down, highlighting a person’s face. In fact, Adam wasn’t sure if they were human. Their eyes…the eyes were black. Not the iris, the whole eye. Black. The small light traced soft lines of the face; a female. He couldn’t help but think that she would be a beautiful person if…she wasn’t this thing. This thought instantly disappeared as her jaw elongated, plunging into his neck with a hiss. The darkness took hold, as he slipped away, from his last moments of living.
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Thu May 05, 2011 6:27 am
YAY! I love this. You're a great writer (as i've told you about 1,000,000 times)... 
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Thu May 05, 2011 6:31 am
EEP...this is v.good...
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Mon May 09, 2011 2:11 am
:suspect:- Ninpire wrote:amazing!
Indeed
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Claire the Ninja God Mon May 09, 2011 2:13 am
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- Ninpire wrote:amazing!
Indeed
yup
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Mon May 09, 2011 2:38 am
Indeed
yup
Yes-aroony..
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Agatha Mon May 09, 2011 2:43 am
Are you guys now just fighting over power?
Indeed
yup
Yes-aroony..
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Mon May 09, 2011 2:44 am
Agatha wrote:Are you guys now just fighting over power?
Indeed
yup
Yes-aroony..
...well, yes, but Emoo pop IS amazing!
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Emily Mon May 09, 2011 3:27 am
Okay...here's some more...
January 1’st, 2012
Another year. Adam rolled out of bed, grunting at the light shining through the slits of the blind. He glanced over at the clock before wearily rubbing his eyes and pulling on some clothes that were on the floor. The sound of a boiling kettle could be heard outside the door, which was the only problem with the layout of his flat; the kitchen was always too close to the bedroom. He walked through to find Christa staring intently at the steam rising into the air. He coughed, but she didn’t look up.
‘If you’re seriously going to ignore me because of last night-‘
‘Don’t, Adam’ Christa held up her hand, and then busied herself with making a coffee.
‘It happened, and you can’t pretend like it didn’t’
The metal spoon hit the sides of the mug, making clinking noises.
‘You’re so pathetic’
Christa dropped her spoon on the kitchen worktop angrily.
‘I’m pathetic? What’s pathetic is that you took an advantage of a fucked up drunk’
Adam scoffed and stared at the wall.
‘I didn’t take advantage. You said you wanted to’
‘I was drunk Adam! I was clearly out of my head’
‘No, you were moping around because Tom had left’
‘whilst being drunk’
‘You weren’t’
‘Yes. I was’
‘No’
‘Yes’
Christa gulped the coffee down, before pulling a face as it scorched her tongue.
‘I wouldn’t feel like I had been hit by a car this morning, if I wasn’t drunk last night. Plus, I can’t remember half the things I did, or said’
Adam hesitated as she picked up the mug, shuffling into the living room and sat on the sofa. He followed her slowly.
‘Are you trying to make me feel bad about it?’
‘Yes’
‘Why?’
‘Because I do, and you should too. You cheated on Celia’
Adam shrugged, even though Christa was facing away from him.
‘We’re on a break’
‘Since when?’
‘Since I said so’
‘Does she know about ‘this break’ as you call it?’
Christa laughed weakly when Adam didn’t reply. He sat down next to her on the sofa, studying her expression.
‘I still like you, Christa’
She paused from drinking, and placed it carefully on the small table in front of her.
‘We’ve been through this before’
‘It’s possible to like two people at once, you know’
‘Yes. But when that happens, someone always gets hurt’
‘In this situation it would be-‘
‘Me, Adam. This whole thing, it will blow over. You’ll go back to Celia and I’ll find someone else. Nothing will be said, okay?’
‘whatever’
‘What’s that supposed to mean?’
‘It means, whatever’
‘If you want to leave it then, fine’
January 1’st, 2012
Another year. Adam rolled out of bed, grunting at the light shining through the slits of the blind. He glanced over at the clock before wearily rubbing his eyes and pulling on some clothes that were on the floor. The sound of a boiling kettle could be heard outside the door, which was the only problem with the layout of his flat; the kitchen was always too close to the bedroom. He walked through to find Christa staring intently at the steam rising into the air. He coughed, but she didn’t look up.
‘If you’re seriously going to ignore me because of last night-‘
‘Don’t, Adam’ Christa held up her hand, and then busied herself with making a coffee.
‘It happened, and you can’t pretend like it didn’t’
The metal spoon hit the sides of the mug, making clinking noises.
‘You’re so pathetic’
Christa dropped her spoon on the kitchen worktop angrily.
‘I’m pathetic? What’s pathetic is that you took an advantage of a fucked up drunk’
Adam scoffed and stared at the wall.
‘I didn’t take advantage. You said you wanted to’
‘I was drunk Adam! I was clearly out of my head’
‘No, you were moping around because Tom had left’
‘whilst being drunk’
‘You weren’t’
‘Yes. I was’
‘No’
‘Yes’
Christa gulped the coffee down, before pulling a face as it scorched her tongue.
‘I wouldn’t feel like I had been hit by a car this morning, if I wasn’t drunk last night. Plus, I can’t remember half the things I did, or said’
Adam hesitated as she picked up the mug, shuffling into the living room and sat on the sofa. He followed her slowly.
‘Are you trying to make me feel bad about it?’
‘Yes’
‘Why?’
‘Because I do, and you should too. You cheated on Celia’
Adam shrugged, even though Christa was facing away from him.
‘We’re on a break’
‘Since when?’
‘Since I said so’
‘Does she know about ‘this break’ as you call it?’
Christa laughed weakly when Adam didn’t reply. He sat down next to her on the sofa, studying her expression.
‘I still like you, Christa’
She paused from drinking, and placed it carefully on the small table in front of her.
‘We’ve been through this before’
‘It’s possible to like two people at once, you know’
‘Yes. But when that happens, someone always gets hurt’
‘In this situation it would be-‘
‘Me, Adam. This whole thing, it will blow over. You’ll go back to Celia and I’ll find someone else. Nothing will be said, okay?’
‘whatever’
‘What’s that supposed to mean?’
‘It means, whatever’
‘If you want to leave it then, fine’
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Howling-Shadow Sun May 29, 2011 6:47 am
Beauty can come in weird forms but this is a beauty that everyone can see the beauty of a writer
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Sun May 29, 2011 10:47 pm
Emoo pop wrote:How to be a vampire, chapter one:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/1/How_to_be_a_vampire
I seriously love this.
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Thu Jun 02, 2011 2:37 am
Emoo pop wrote:How to be a vampire chapter two: The previous night
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/2
J'adore!
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Emily Wed Jun 08, 2011 5:56 am
'it was like a dream'
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/3/
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/3/
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:27 am
OMG. Seriously LOVE this. 
. Keep going, please!
. Keep going, please!
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Emily Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:05 am
Return with fury:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/4/
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/4/
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Emily Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:50 am
a little Christmas present 
sorry it's been so long.
The Dog days are over:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/6/
sorry it's been so long.
The Dog days are over:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/6/
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Re: How to be a vampire: Sneak peak!
by Nameless Child Sat Dec 24, 2011 10:21 pm
Emoo pop wrote:a little Christmas present
sorry it's been so long.
The Dog days are over:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7027946/6/
Hooray! Thanks for carrying this on, great job.
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