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Post by other annie on Tue Apr 12, 2011 7:38 pm

this is somthing a little random that dosent really go any where yet:
I stepped out the train. it was quite, 10 people at most on the platform. I wondered how long it would take me to kill them all, every last one of them. There was a mother with three kids and a baby, a bussines man, two members of station staff and a teenage couple, i was closest to them, they were next to me. 'Will you love me forever?' 'for more than that' the girl let out a giggle. I wanted to tell them forever is along time, and so little can last for forever. i ran my btounge along my teeth and got up. i was hungry, i would find a tramp or busker, someone that wouldn't get noticed. thats how I lived. The moment i walked out the station, i knew my routines, my life that had been held by sticky tape for the last few years, had finally fallen apart. she sat on the bench, crying, i hadnt seen her in over a decade but,like me, she was frozen, like a photograph. Daisy.
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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:02 pm

oh i like it annie! you should finish it... soon Very Happy
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Post by other annie on Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:55 am

Right part 2 is Below
other annie wrote:this is somthing a little random that dosent really go any where yet:
I stepped out the train. it was quite, 10 people at most on the platform. I wondered how long it would take me to kill them all, every last one of them. There was a mother with three kids and a baby, a bussines man, two members of station staff and a teenage couple, i was closest to them, they were next to me. 'Will you love me forever?' 'for more than that' the girl let out a giggle. I wanted to tell them forever is along time, and so little can last for forever. i ran my btounge along my teeth and got up. i was hungry, i would find a tramp or busker, someone that wouldn't get noticed. thats how I lived. The moment i walked out the station, i knew my routines, my life that had been held by sticky tape for the last few years, had finally fallen apart. she sat on the bench, crying, i hadnt seen her in over a decade but,like me, she was frozen, like a photograph. Daisy.
‘Daisy? It’s me, Lizze, are you ok?’
She looked up, a surprised look on her face. Her whole body was trembling.
‘He’s dead. They killed him. The fucking bastards killed him, what did he ever do?’ she had stood up by this point. She was in hysterics. ‘But we showed them’ her voice had a scary undertone, she giggled ‘me and Mitchell, twenty of them, easy…’ she paused for effect ‘…as…’ she liked drama, she made her victims so scared, so scared they wanted to die. She whispered the last word, she said as though it were sacred ‘…pie.’ A shiver went down my spine. Twenty people, she killed twenty people in one of her tantrums. Mitchell, of course, he probably encouraged her and all. I never liked Mitchell, there was something, sinister, about the way he looked. Herrick’s favourite. I was there, when we did that solider in the bar. Jeremy, what a name! who actually looks at a kid and says ‘Jeremy, that’s his name’ and of course Jeremy was blonde, with blue eyes. He was German, I think, I can still remember the look on his face when he realized what was going on. A shocked recognition, then his face fell as the inevitable dawned on him. He sprinted for the door and Mitchell had grabbed him, and bit. That was it, no more Jeremy. Full stop, end of.
I realized daisy was staring at me. ‘Who died?’ I asked simply.
‘Ivan, they killed Ivan.’
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Post by other annie on Sat Apr 16, 2011 6:43 am

That night I dreamt of the night they’d changed me. Daisy hadn’t even been born yet, Ivan’s previous girlfriend, Stephanie, had changed me. She was similar to daisy in attitude. I was in bed that night, it was cold. My brother was curled up in my arms. The door had slammed. ‘Shhhh, you’ll wake the children’ said my dads slurring voice, ‘The fucking bastards, always want something.’ He put on a childish voice ‘dad I’m cold, dad I’m hungry….’ there was a loud slam. ‘Stephanie? I…I… I was kidding, you kn-now that? R-r-right?’
‘You are a fucking bastard’ an unfamiliar voice echoed ‘I can’t wait to free those poor kids’
‘now now Stephanie, the poor man, scared out his wits now, wouldn’t you say Herrick?’
‘Yes, lets introduce ourselves, shall we?’
‘Who the Fudge are you? Get out my house! NOW! Or I’ll..’
‘what? What can you do to me? Mitchell you have this one, Herrick his wife’s down the corridor, Ivan…. He said he had servants you go check. The kids, their mine.’
The door creaked open.
‘Hush little baby’ she stepped in ‘don’t you cry’ her head flicked to one side ‘mommas gonna sing you a lullaby’ My brother stood up and walked towards her. ‘Hush little baby’ She took his hand ‘don’t say a word’ she blinked her eyes flashed black, ‘mommas gonna buy you a mocking bird’ She flicked her head back and bit. He screamed and then, fell limp to the floor. She turned to me, ‘What are you? Why did you kill him? Where’s my mother?’ her eyes returned to there normal colour, her face fell.
‘I’m special, different, I like you. Join me.’
‘What?’
I don’t know what happened next, it was all a little fuzzy.
My father ran in screaming, holding my mothers body, Stephanie had changed me. I was falling asleep, still barley conscious, my father saw my brother picked up a chair and broke it. ‘filthy, fucking whore.’ he said with an eerie calmness, as my eyes closed I saw him run, and heard her scream, Ivan’s yell, a soft gasp from my father and the deathly silence as a finally died.

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