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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Fri Apr 08, 2011 8:53 am

This is a story that I have already written and will be giving to you in chapters. I'm sorry if it's not very good but still, it's not a fan fic but kinda goes with the same themes. I apologize for any typos/ mistakes.

Chapter 1
Painful Beginnings
Elliot
It was starting to get cold. It always did around June time. Packing up my bags I started moving. It was the only way to keep warm. I stared back at the sad, blue sun and it seemed to frown back at me. Although the sun had gone so long ago, I could remember the stories my grandfather had told me, about the glowing brightness the glittering reflections that it made. Remembering the stories made me feel all warm inside the happiness filled me.
Back in the real world I had to find it. Scavenging all over the dark desolate plans of the abandoned city I found nothing. I had looked through the long forgotten waste rockets which were the elected government’s last idea to get rid of the rubbish, still I found nothing.
I looked high and low through the deserted space scrapers. I went all the way to the top and had to use the stair since the power had been cut from the sonic lifts half a millaner ago. I was just about to give up.
And then I saw them…
About 400 of her royal guard galloping towards the building to which I was hiding. They weren’t on real horse’s just pretend metal ones to make them look powerful. All the horses were eaten now. I heard a man or should I say boy at the front speak. He had pale blue eyes and strawberry blonde hair. The fact to which he was a boy puzzled me, we were in the age of the woman now, the men had their chance at running the world and look what they had done to it. His guard where all woman so it wasn’t completely crazy.
They weren’t moving now, just looking. The boy seemed to have a metal compass in his hand and was searching. Searching for me.
No!
No, no, no, no. They can’t be looking for me. If her majesty got her hands on me then she could live forever. Thousands, no millions of people would die in her reign and it would never end. I had to stay away from her before the whole suffered.
Suddenly a wave of cold ran over me and a shiver went down my spine. I turned around and they were there.
Preparing myself to run, the boy in front turned to me and said.
“Wait we just want to talk.”
An idea suddenly accured to me.
“Sure” I smiled sweetly “Could we talk somewhere a little more” I turned to look at his guards. “Private”.
“I don’t see why not” he smiled pleased I was cooperating, when really I was doing nothing of the sort.
I walked backwards towards a staircase then up it, always keeping an eye on the group of people bellow me just in case any of them made an abrupt move. Once I had successfully monoverd the stairs I walked in to an old apartment with a south facing window. The boy followed suite.
“What did you want to say” he murmured looking a little awkward or scared without his army to protect him.
“Nothing much” I smiled at his pretty face “Just this”
I grabbed the rock from my pocket and thumped it on his head. Stumbling for a second his eyes rolled upwards and suddenly he fell backward. He had been standing a little closer to the window then I was planning. With an eye splitting crack his body fell through the window and landed in a truck full of half millennia old rubbish.
“Crap” I thought, but not because I almost killed him, no he deserved that.
“That was MY escape route” I shouted into the murky void of emptiness beneath me. “Oh well I hope he is a soft landing” with that I stood on the windowsill and jumped 16 floors down. Thankfully I landed next to him in the dustbin lorry.
“Well that was fun” I said out loud.
Just after I said that I could hear the sound of confusion and terror from the building above. Beside me Blondie was as still as ever however sadly he was still breathing. That bin became my home for the next week as a search party was thrown to find the boy. Gratefully they gave up soon enough. Un-fortunately Blondie woke up a couple of days later.
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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Sat Apr 09, 2011 10:36 pm

Chapter 2
Trash Talk
Paige (Blondie)
I woke up with the worst head ache I have ever had. It was like being in a room with a thousand seven year olds playing the recorder right in my ear. As I sat up taking in my surroundings, I realised I was sitting on a mountain of rubbish. All I could remember before it went all black was being in a building with that girl. As I turned around there she was, red hair that looked like it had never been brushed was wild around her head small extremely pale blemish free skin. Her eyes, they stared at me green and savage. Her hair as well as never been brushed also looked like it had never been cut either. It went down to her waste, hair was thought to be wasteful in the cities if she had lived there if would have been shaved off since birth. She looked around 5”1 and 15 years old. All her clothes were black she even wore a black cloak with the hood down.
“Where am I?” I spluttered. She turned to me and once again I could feel the weight of her savage green eyes on me.
“You are so cliché.” She muttered to herself
“Who are you?” I asked cautiously
“Who am i? Well I could be lots of things.” She sighed “if you promise to stop your stupid questions I’ll tell you what’s going on”
“I’ll stop” I promised
“You’ve been out cold for over a week now and your army has been looking for you and as they haven’t found a body and because you were so eager to talk to me they have come to the conclusion that you’re a traitor” she told me all of this with a bright smug smile on her wild pale face.
“They think I’m a traitor, that I commuted treason?” I stuttered. Those words were so hard to say. I had been brought up to detest outlaws, nomads, savages like this girl before me and my army thought I had teamed up with her. The very idea disgusted me.
“Don’t spare my feelings or anything” she retorted with a sarcastic smile. I quickly hid my disgusted frown.
“Don’t think that I’m happy about this either. In fact this is way worse for me, not only do I have all of your old army after me I also have any other search party is looking for you looking for me. They think where ever I am you are. Then she looked at me in a face that must have mirrored mine earlier.
“Could I just ask?” I watched her face and measured her annoyance at my question. I decided to ask straight away.
“What are we doing in a dust bin lorry?”
she stared at me her lips pulled together in a thin line. Maybe I had miss calculated her annoyance.
“We fell from the 16th floor of that building” she pointed up “When I mean fall, I mean you fell I jumped.”
That explained the head ache.
“So what are we going to do? If everyone thinks that I’m with you then we might as well stick together for survival” she raised her eyebrows at me.
“I don’t need help from to survive from a boy! You need me, I don’t need you.” She had a point I did need her. If I went back home now I would be executed for treason and betrayal. My only way to survive would be to go on the run and she knew more about that than me.
“Fine come with me” she sighed “but here are the rules; No annoying questions and don’t get in my way and my names Elliot.”
“Yes!” I screamed a little too enthusiastically. “I mean thanks. My name’s Paige. So how about getting out of this bin lorry?”

oh i just realised that i called the main boy charracter paige. i wrote this story in November so i didn't no you guys then. sorry What a Face if i offerended you Laughing
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Chapter 3
Armed
Elliot
I have no idea how he managed to get me to agree to take him with me, but now stupid Blondie and I were together running away from the authorities, fugitives. Somehow he thinks this makes us friends.
“For the hundredth time you are not my friend and you never will be.” I snapped at him.
At the moment me and Paige where walking to the only safe place I knew which was my aunties house. She had been dead for a long time but the house was safe. We were walking along the road that lead straight to her house. The road was called the M25. People aren’t quite sure what it was used for as it was built by our troubled and confusing ancestors.
I scanned my eyes across the endless horizon when my sharp ears picked up the sound of a gun being loaded.
Click click snap
“Get down” I whispered in to Paige’s ear and dragged him down with me. “ I heard a gun” I said in a hushed tone.
“How could you hear a gun when it hasn’t even gone off yet” He muttered to himself seeming annoyed that once again I had seemed to be better than him.
“Bang” The sound of the shot ran out over our heads.
“See” I murmured with a smug smile. I crawled over to a ditch to hide in and Blondie followed me. We were lying there for a good half an hour when I decided to move however, Paige was a little apprehensive.
“You sure it’s safe?” he asked nervously
“Stop being such a boy!” I stood up and started climbing the banks of the ditch when suddenly another shot ran out but this time whistling past my ear. I stared up to find a group of 3 young royalists that must have recognised me and Paige from the wanted telegrams I’m sure the royal family had made.
“Hi” I whispered “Run” I shouted to Paige bellow me and surprisingly he did what I said. I ran after him and could hear the royalists in hot persuade and firing although they were pretty bad at aiming when running luckily for us.
“Behind here” Paige shouted to me and pointed to a large rock coming out of the dusty ground and locked to be made from granite. As soon as we got some where safe I run zipped my rucksack and emptied out to guns.
“You have a gun?!”He said eyes widening
“Ones for you. Now hold it and look menacing”
“But I don’t know how to work a gun.” Looking like he was going into shock.
“Shut up there fake. Just stand behind me and look like you do know how to work it.” I walked out from behind the rock to gun raised. They had just caught up to us and seeing me with a gun made them stop for half a second just enough time for me to shoot them down. However there were only 3 of them the 3rd one managed to shot me in the shoulder before I killed her. Paige looked as white as a sheet. I did not want all 6”5 of him to fall on top of me so I helped him to sit.
“You said they were fake.” He barely whispered
“I had to stop you from turning the gun on yourself.” I smiled trying to cheer him up. For some reason it hurt me to see him in pain.
As I sat down I remembered that i had been shot in the shoulder and could feel the hot wet blood drip down my arm and suddenly realised why Paige had gone even whiter.
“Here” he ripped off some of his shirt and wrapped it round my shoulder.
“Thanks” I smiled but new that when he got around to his usually colour he would be extremely smug about the whole incident. I sighed. I really hope I wasn’t starting to think of someone other than myself.
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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Mon Apr 11, 2011 7:27 am

Chapter 4
The Dream
Paige
She said it didn’t hurt but I knew she was trying to be brave.
“I’ll carry you.” I suggested with concerned eyes. These days we were just like good friends.
“Get lost Paige I’m fine.” Another thing that had changed over the past weeks was she had stopped calling me Blondie which was good.” Anyway you wouldn’t be able to carry me.” She teased eyebrows raised.
“So you’re saying your fat.” I laughed
“No I’m saying your weak.” To prove a point she pushed me in to a bush.
We were both in a good mode because we were only about 10 miles from Elliot’s old Aunties house. We had been walking sleeping spending every minute on the road for the past 3 months and I needed a shower. Before I meat Elliot I had never walked further than a couple of meters or I would use me bullet car.

“Last night we have to sleep on the ground!” I cheered and we clunked glasses. “So how long have you lived on the road?” she thought about it for a second then answered.
“I have never lived in a house” I choked on my drink.
“Never?”
“Until I met you I have never seen a boy with his own army. How did you swing that?” She asked with questioning eyes.
“See when you’re the son of the leader of the world”
“Dictator” She interrupted and I ignored it.
“Sexism doesn’t really come into things.” She didn’t seem that surprised that I was a prince. “I thought you would be surprised” I asked her confused. She had said a number of times how much she hated the royal family.
“I guessed as much” She shrugged.
“You know you’ve never lived in a house well I have never met my mum. Bet that!” I said with triumph even through there was nothing to triumph about it.
“Yeah I knew that because only about 10 people have ever met her and some people think she doesn’t exist at all.” What she said was right. I had been brought up by a nanny with my sisters.
“Tell me something about yourself that no one in the whole world knows but you” she asked
“I hate cheese. Can’t stand the stuff all yellow and smelly.” She laughed which made me laugh to. Her Laugh was infectious.
“We better get to bed” she sighed
“Yeah” I agreed “The last home straight tomorrow.” I yawned and went to sleep.
That night I was a woken by a sound of air whooshing past my ears.
“Elliot is that you” I mumbled confused and half asleep. I opened my eyes to see that I was floating on a cloud in the sky only when I looked down there was no earth beneath me. The cloud was moving forward at a rapid pace and then suddenly came to a halt. There standing in front of me was a lady that I knew quite well even though I had never seen her before. I recognised my eyes in her face and with a sudden gasp I knew that was my mum. I remembered before I had met Elliot and this all happened that I had heard some word around the palace where I lived that they were working on something that could talk to you in your dreams where ever you were in the world. This is what must be happening now. The lady in front of me didn’t say anything but I knew what I had to do. She gave me a parcel and the cloud drifted away.
I awoke with a start quite sure that I was really awake this time. I looked in my hand and there was the parcel my mother had given me with the instructions on what to do, tapped around the outside. Inside the parcel was what looked like and GUPS (Global Universe Positioning System). The instructions said only this. “Press the button when the time is right.” I knew like I had in the dream that I must do anything to see my mum. I had to turn in Elliot.
I pressed the button.
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haha i love it!! Smile
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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:20 pm

sorry this isn't very long but its for dramatic effect! i also throught i wpuld share what i think Elliot would look like at the end.

Chapter 5
Betrayal
Elliot
As soon as I woke up I knew something was wrong. Paige was quiet and serous the complete opposite to last night in fact it was like when we had first met. Then I remembered the feeling I had all through the night and new why he was like that. Some people say that I have a sixth sense for trouble. For whatever reason I knew that he was going to betray me.
There were some things that I had to tell him before I was taken away. Some were to save the world others to keep the peace between me and him. First I had to deal with the saving he world. It did mean lying to him but it was a price to pay. I just hope he wouldn’t see through them
“Paige” I said. He looked up. “You know the reason that I have been on the road all my life is to find the drug for eternal life and destroy it”
“Yeah” he said with no emotion
“Well I have found it. I’ll tell you where it is later” if he knew that I knew where it was then her majesty would never know that I was the drug and the world might be saved. It was an easily fooled plan but I had to try.

Next I had to tell him things that he needed to no but I couldn’t tell him now so I wrote him a letter. It ended up that we did sleep another night on the ground because Paige was “sick” so while he was sleeping I picked up an old piece of cheese burger packing and wrote on that with the pen I got from Paige’s bag. In the letter I wrote how I knew what he would do and that I was the drug. He had to know this after but only after the soldiers had gone. I hoped he would forgive me for lying the way I forgave him for betraying me.
Once the letter was written placed it in his bag I also put my 2 guns in there while he was sleeping and weighted for them to take me away.



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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:29 am

sorry another extremly short chapter but the next is much longer Smile. enjoy

Chapter 6
Lies
Paige
I watched as they took her away. She didn’t give up much of a fight as they dragged her away from me. As her red hair blow in the wind and her black cloak bellowed around her. She didn’t keep her eyes off me though. The eyes of the betrayed bored in to my soul like electrical drills. I hated myself then truly hated myself, but I had to see my mother. I knew that once I saw those eyes everything would be alright. I would forget about the savage girl that had stolen my heart. Elliots reaction hurt me the most. If she had betrayed me I would be so angry but she just let them take her away. Maybe she didn’t care for me the way I did for her.
I was assorted on to a trotter or metal horse and we went to the palace were my mother lived. Elliot was taken in the other direction. The palace had a 20ft fence running all around the outside. There seemed to be a constant rain cloud hovering over the building, as if it was sunken in deep depression. As we approached the building I began to doubt my actions.
“She will be worth it” I chanted in my head covensing myself that I did the right thing. We rode to the front hall and dismounted.
“So when do I get to see my mother I asked my to lady escorts.” They both burst out laughing. My heart sunk to the floor.
“No one EVER sees her majesty” the taller dark haired woman said still a giggerly.
“But I gave information, I saw in my dream I, I, I,…” I couldn’t take it anymore and got on my trotter. I rode straight out the palace and jumped the fence. It was easy with a metal horse with reinforced springs for legs. It could properly jump 50ft if I wanted to.
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Chapter 7
Pain
Elliot
Even when I knew that it was going to happen it still felt like someone had gouged a whole in my chest using just a spoon. They took me away in the opposite direction to Paige, back down the road that we had spent weeks walking down. In the bullet car it only took 10mins. I had never ridden in one before so when we stopped so suddenly I threw up all over my captures. They weren’t too pleased.
When I got out of the car they opened a whole in the ground and threw me down it. I landed feet first ,thank god, I what seemed like a chamber completely covered in white. White walls, white tiles. It made a great contrast to my read hair and black cloak. The chamber was very small about 2m-2m with nothing it except a small tube that came out of the white wall. I stared at it wondering what on earth it could be when all of a sudden hundreds of gallons of water was forced through the small tube at about 100mph. The force of the water pushed me to the floor and washed me through. It washed out my eyes, mouth every hole in my body was flushed through with this liquid that I wasn’t quite shore if it was water or not.
Once the water had stopped flowering everything started moving around me. What I thought where solid walls wobbled around like jelly, the floor seemed to disappear beneath me. I tried to stand up but my knees could no longer hold my weight anymore. My stomach started to feel queasy and I threw up all over the floor. I lyed down on the ground in a ball. My body longed for sleep so i gave in and let it take me under.
It felt like I had just blinked my eyes when I started hearing voices around me.
“How much sedation did you give her?” One very low gruff voice was asking.
“We weren’t quite sure how much she need so we gave her as much as a baby elephant” I had no Idea what one of those was but I assumed it was a lot bigger than me.
“She’ll open her eyes in about half an hour I should think.” A woman with a very high pitched voice tweeted this.
I decided that whatever they had planned for we wasn’t going to be pretty so I might as well get it over and down with.
“I’ve had a wonderful life” I thought I had been 16 for 103 years longer than most people and had enjoyed it. I made a pact with myself to not say a word about anything however much they tortured me, I also wanted to prove the squeaky voice wrong so I opened my eyes then.
I saw straight away I was in a scientific lab and what lying in what looked like a hospital bed. There were about 10 shelves around the room with different bottles all different colours and each with their own individual label. The room was bigger that the white chamber but still not very large. I guess it was about 3m-5m. I felt very self-conscious as there were five people in the room all staring at me with disapproving eyes. There were four woman and one man all of them dressed in green overall and each carrying a clip board. I looked down at what I was wearing and saw I was wearing the same overalls but in orange and OUTLAW was printed on the front and on theirs was IMPLOYEY.
I sat up in my bed and stared at them. They stared at me back until the man nodded once and everything changed.
The two women on the sides walked towards me and hand cuffed my arms behind my back. They carried me out of the science lab across some corridors and in to another room. This one only had done chair and a table. They strapped me to the chair using old leather belt straps. I didn’t struggle I knew it would only make this worse. The wall opposite me was made from black glass, one way glass I assumed. They could see me I couldn’t see them. I knew it was childish but I couldn’t help myself from sticking out my tongue at the people behind the glass. As I did so I felt an electric spark fly up my arms and legs. It felt like a hundred red hot needles sticking in to me all at once. I gave out a loud gasp. The chair was electric hence the straps. I slumped back defeated. I could hear the faint sound of laughter coming from behind the glass. I hid my anger, if I showed it I was sure to get another shock.
Just then a woman very different from the others I had seen walked in to the room. He had white hair tightly pinned up to the back of her head in a bun. She was hearing a black suite and 4 inch heels. Her face was saggy like a mouldy prune and seemed to hold a constant frown of disgust.
“Name” she asked with a look like she had just been sucking lemons. I sat still not moving a muscle not saying a word just waiting for the pain to come. Tiny red hot needles fizzing through me. I hissed as I breathed in as my teeth were tightly clenched together. The pain wasn’t getting any easier. The old prune asked me some more basic information questions. Every time I failed to answer, every time I was shocked.
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Chapter 8
The letter
Paige
I didn’t stop riding for 2 days straight along the rode which me and Elliot had walked. I needed time to think. The only time I stopped was to eat. As I opened my bag I found an old cheese burger packaging, I was about to throw it away when I realised it had writing on. It said started like this

Dear Paige,
It’s really hard to put into word what I want to say but you have to know. I have to tell you that I know you are going to betray me and I forgive you. I have a feeling inside me when trouble is soon to happen and it told me you were going to betray me. What you’re going to hurts me really bad Paige but I’m sure its for a good reason.
I also have to tell you that I’m not who you think I am. I am the drug Paige it’s me. I have been 16 for 103 years now and I will never get any older. I was never born but created in a science lab. Some people believe in the legend of the forever teenager but most people think I’m a meth. Although I don’t grow old I can still die from being shot or from dieses. If anyone ever got my blood in there system my curse could be given to them and so on.
Lastly I want to say that I love you.
Hope I see you soon however that unlikely.
Love Elliot

Blinking back the tears that came to me I got up and got on my trotter. I had to save Elliot. For some reason I knew that Elliot’s old aunts house what significant so I went there first.
It only took me a couple of hours on my trotter to reach the little red house me and Elliot had dreamed of arriving at for weeks. Now I was alone and this was my only hope. I knocked on the door to see if anyone lived there.
Knock, knock, knock
A little old lady opened the door. She had long blond hair although it was turning grey now and pale blue eyes. I had never seen her before but I recognised her immediately, cold shiver ran down my spine.
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Chapter 9
The escape
Elliot
Why wouldn’t they kill me all ready? I could take the pain but not when the whole world was at risk. I had to find a way to escape, but this facility was water tight. Of what I had seen of it, walking to and from the interrogation room everyday was once you had entered you never left.
By over hearing talk from employs after they sedated me every night, I found out that there were two entrances therefore two exits. The first was the one I had entered this hell in however I couldn’t escape through it because extremely hard to climb up. So I had to escape through the main entrance.
I had a plan to escape. It wasn’t pretty, but the only way I could get out. If they found out I was the drug all along I couldn’t leave this world and know what monster I had unleashed.
I carried out my pan as soon as I had the chance.
It might have killed me but what did I have to lose? If I died my secret would come with me to the grave.
One the day I planned to escape they took me back to the science lab like any other night and locked the door. My first priority was to unlock my hand cuffs; they almost felt a part of me now they hadn’t been taken off since I had entered this hell whole. I nearly felt sad to see them go, almost. During the day I had found a piece of small wire on the floor and started trying to unlock them. After several minutes of picking and prodding them I managed to realise my hands.
Stage 1 completed on to stage 2.
As I had never tried to escape before they had left the door from my bed to the science lab open so I walked into the familiar science lab that I had stared at many times from my own prison. I looked closer at the colourful bottles on the shelves that covered the small walls of the room. I looked closer at the bottles and could make out strange shapes inside the liquid. Some looked like frightened heads of fish screaming out to me to help them. I moved quickly on to the other shelves till I found what I was looking for.
Once I was equipped with all I needed it was time for stage 3 and got ready for the escape.
3, 2, 1
“Bang”
My seconds old homemade bomb went off as I threw it at the door. Having 103 years of life I had learnt a couple of skills along the way. The panic spread like wild fire. Alarms bells where ringing all over the facility and people came running. As I ran through the whole which the door had been I knocked out an employee an idea suddenly accured to me. It would be almost impossible to escape un-noticed in bright orange overalls. I quickly swapped our clothes and grabbed her gun from the holster.
Running I tried to find the entrance but with no avail. I had to get far away from the lab as possible this way less people would recognise me. I also had left another little surprise very much like the first one but this was planned to go off in 10 minutes.
I had been walking down the same corridor for an awful long time when I came across a room which seemed to house the facilities weapons. What luck! I used the id from the person from which I had borrowed the coat from to let me in. grapping a knife I cut my hair to look more like the workers here as they all thought hair a luxury and un-necessary. While in the weapons room and took a machine gun and machete, also for protection I took a bomb proof vest which would protect me from knives, bullets and explosions.
Walking through this building was like an extremely confusing maze that had no beginning and no end. I began to feel like I was getting closer to the exit when more people passed me in the corridor grateful none recognised me. It was like as soon as I was wearing green I was invisible. I started to run as I heard the noises from outside. After several more minutes. The door was in my sight. It was guarded by what looked like 20 armed, trained and extremely dangerous soldiers with looks that would send a child screaming for their parents. I hid behind a pillar and thought through tactics. They were almost certainly wearing bomb proof vests so I would aim for their heads.
“What have you got to lose” I chanted in my head.
With that I took one deep breath and went for it.
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Post by Claire the Ninja God on Sun May 22, 2011 10:01 pm

second to last chapter! (i don't think anyone is reading this but i can dream Very Happy)

Chapter 10
Mother
Paige
I had got my wish.
Meeting my mum wasn’t what I had thought. I didn’t feel like I was complete or happy in fact I felt nothing. She wasn’t my mum, just a random person who had a vague resemblance to.
She wasn’t the lady in my dream just a sad old lady with too much power than anyone could ever handle.
That morning when I first met her she had welcomed me inside and asked me my name. I refused to come in as I had no idea what she had down to the cottage. I assumed she was living out in the dessert as a protection from threats. Now that I knew where she was there was something that I had to do. I had to kill here. For Elliot. For the world. But I couldn’t bring myself to do it, not because she was my mum but because killing people wasn’t in my nature unlike Elliot.
One day I brought up the courage to try and end her life. I knocked on the little red door like I had done before.
“Hello” she whispered with a wicked smile
“I wondering if that invitation was still open” I asked with my most charming smile. I didn’t not if she knew who I was or not.
“Sure come in” she seemed a little specious, or it might just be me being paranoid.
I had found Elliot’s two guns in my bag the day I found her letter, she must have put them in there. I was planning to shot “her majesty” in the back when she wasn’t looking. I wasn’t a very good plan but the best I could come up with.
She gave me tea and biscuits and as I hadn’t had really food in a long time I ate them all up. She got up from the table and turned around. I was about to take the gun from my pocket and shot when the whole room started swaying. I felt so tired and shut my eyes.
“Sleep now my baby boy. Sleep and never wake up” I heard a faint voice somewhere through the blackness that I was now neck deep in. I could feel something heavy pressed hard against my temple but my brain was in too much of a jumble to think anything of it.
A single shot ran out. Then I drifted.
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Re: Life, Forever

Post by Nameless Child on Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:12 am

I thought I recognised that intro on Polyvore. Oh well, worth another read or 2. Very Happy
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Re: Life, Forever

Post by Claire the Ninja God on Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:16 am

yeah, i did think you had read it before. im just really proud of it Very Happy im writing another story on polyvore 2, you can read that as well Very Happy
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Re: Life, Forever

Post by Nameless Child on Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:19 am

Yeah, I've read the first chapter of that, T'is good.
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